Scared you a lil’
bit? Good. As with all blog posts, authors need to GRAB the reader’s attention,
and today I’m going to show how the already aggressive rugger displays voice in
blogs. “Voice,” simply, is the means that authors convey their personality
through their text by their use of diction, phrasing, and content. All authors
have voice, some more amusing than others, but no two are ever the same.
Tim O’Connor is
barrister, and now that his playing days are over, he fills this void with his
blog title simply, “Rugby Law” where he explores rugby and the laws that govern
it. After reading his posts, it is clear that Tim did have rugby experience and
that I am not the first to question the safety of rugby, especially in the
scrums.
He first lets readers
know about the amount of pressure first-row players endure during a scrum by
comparing it to having cars fall on your shoulders.
“Take a small car - this being rugby, let's say a French one,
a Citroen C4. In fact, take two. Suspend one 15 centimetres - six inches - over
each of your shoulders.
Now let them drop.
That's what it is each member for a professional front row to take the hit of a modern scrum. If you're an international hooker, since hookers take a bit more of the hit, you're talking a family saloon like a C5, onto each shoulder. 3kN of an impact. Ten or fifteen times a game.”
Now let them drop.
That's what it is each member for a professional front row to take the hit of a modern scrum. If you're an international hooker, since hookers take a bit more of the hit, you're talking a family saloon like a C5, onto each shoulder. 3kN of an impact. Ten or fifteen times a game.”
With this, he emphasizes how dangerous the scrum can be,
especially for hookers, and that though it is overlooked, the dangers can be as
dangerous as a car falling on someone with 3kN of force. He continues to do this by his concise,
simple statements that help convey that there is nothing complex about the
issue at hand. He states simply,
“The net result has been more dangerous scrums, more resets,
worse scrummaging and more dangerous scrummaging: bad rugby, and dangerous
rugby…And there is no excuse for it.”
His passion is
clear, and he gives authority to himself by stating that he was a prop himself
and pulls in the sympathy of the audience by his anecdote where he had to hold
his hooker’s neck immobile after a bad scrum. Rugby is important to him, being
a third-generation prop, but the issue of safety is so controversial that he
who grew up with rugby is now questioning it and the IRB.
In another post, his angry voice towards the
IRB is again heard in “Concussion – Fatality.” Short and to the point, he tells
reader about a 14-year old boy that died on the pitch because he was left alone
after being concussed for a second time.
“I've written before, on this blog and elsewhere, about the
failure to deal properly with concussion,” he states, exemplifying his dismay
that there are cases where concussions still go untreated, and because he
refuses to comment until the verdict on the case is made, it shows his own
anguish on the event and perhaps his own realization that this is a common
event and ultimately up to the courts as to what will happen, not the players
or community.
Between these two blog posts, Tim shows himself to be a lover of the game of rugby, but like myself, cannot bear to see players continue to be injured by laws meant to promote player safety with the IRB sitting idly aside, watching. His passion is evident by his anecdotal stories and his anger clear towards the IRB. Like me, he understands that change must start with them, and until the IRB amends its law, players are subjected the rules of the game, no matter how dangerous.
Hi PainTrain, you chose really good quotes and analyzed them really well. I like how you used them to show his emotions, personality, and opinions, as well as the effect of his writing on the audience.
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